Monday, May 18, 2020

YELLOW JACK / DEATH NOTICES



"Yellow Jack," watercolor and iridescent calligraphy ink on parchment, 2020, by Troy's Work Table.

Inspired by my own recently published poem, "Death Notices."

The maritime signal flag "Lima" is also known as the "Yellow Jack" and when flown alone symbolizes a ship under quarantine due to contagion.



"Death Notices" was published in the May 2020 issue of Creative Colloquy. You can read it at http://creativecolloquy.com/death-notices-by-troy-kehm-goins/

The poem was inspired by the "death notices" published in the classified section of newspapers, as well as the four main characters found in 1 Samuel 28:3-27—King Saul; the witch of Endor; the shade of the prophet Samuel, conjured forth from Sheol; and the Lord God. The poem presents the "death" of each, although in an oblique manner. (And the deaths are related to the passage, although none of them actually occur within the framework of the Bible passage but elsewhere.)

Saturday, May 02, 2020



Second Hand Smoke Stout, an Imperial Stout, by Midnight Sun Brewing.

22 ounce bottle served in a tulip.

8.4% abv.

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With "Stay Home, Stay Healthy" emergency measures in place throughout the state of Washington, due to the COVID-19 global pandemic, many small businesses are hurting. When a local bar, CaskCades, posted a few bottled beers new to their refrigerated cases, I decided that I needed to go and provide them some business.

I've been without an independent beer bottle store that I can claim as "home base" since the closure of 99 Bottles. But COVID-19, as well as causing a bunch of trouble for everyone, has also provided me an opportunity to rethink things and reimagine how I can operate within the world. I'm declaring CaskCades as my new bottle store.

They had to reimagine how they served beer, since people cannot visit them in the manner of a bar. But they can stop by and purchase canned and bottled beer, as well as purchase 32-ounce crowlers and 64-ounce growlers of beers on tap. I likewise reimagined what I need a bottle store to look like. I realized I don't need hundreds of options. Rather, I'm good with a smaller selection of available beers, knowing that those I can purchase are "curated" by fellow beer lovers. With thirty taps and easily another thirty or so beers in cans or bottles, I have plenty of choices. And CaskCades is within walking distance of my home.

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The first beer that attracted my attention, and helped to get me into CaskCades this afternoon, was Second Hand Smoke. I like smoked beers, as long as they are done well. This one is done well!

The pour is a black body with a thin tan head.

The nose is chocolate and smoke and a bit of grass.

The tongue is campfire, dark chocolate, vanilla cream, dark fruits (dates/plum), and maltiness. The mouthfeel is a bit thinner than I expected, but I was fine with it. The finish isn't too long, but the campfire smokiness mellows out into more complex flavors.

This is an enjoyable beer. It is well-balanced, with a punch of smoke at the beginning of each drink that allows for the other flavors to shine as it ebbs. Highly recommended.

OBIT



I was introduced to the poetry of Victoria Chang in her third book The Boss. McSweeney's started publishing a "Poetry Series" and I had a subscription. The Boss was the fifth book in the series and published in 2013. So the book "fell into my lap."

What I found inside was wonderful and intriguing. Each poem was structured with stanzas of four lines, and they appeared to be somewhat formal until one started to read. Poems were filled with echoes, internal rhymes, slant rhymes, allusions, alliteration, puns, and the like. There was no punctuation. Sentences and phrases sometimes ended in the middle of a line. Other times they ran across line breaks. I was forced to slow down and really pay attention to what I was reading. The reward was that once I figured out how to read these poems they really opened up. The challenge was absolutely worth the time and effort.

As the title of the book suggests, as well as many of the titles of individual poems, many of the poems revolve around a boss. A few poems are about family members. A handful are about Edward Hopper paintings. They are all, in one way or another, about power and relationships and power within relationships.

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Barbie Chang, Victoria Chang's fourth book of poetry, published in 2017, carried forward her "project" of poems about interpersonal relationships. The poems in this book are broken into four sections. Sections one and three are filled with poems with coupled lines that function similar to the four-line stanzas in The Boss. Images and phrases run across line breaks and through the borders of the couplets, without sacrificing any of the wit and wordplay I loved. Sections two and four are "Dear P." sonnets.

There is a slight shift in content, too, as these poems are less about power and, in some sense, more personal. They are definitely focused upon relationships of one to those around us. The narrator is also dealing with parents who are in ill health and having to navigate how to take care of them amidst all of the other aspects of her life.

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Which brings us to Obit. This is Victoria Chang's most personal book of poems. It is infused with loss and grief, brokenness and death.

The majority of the poems are presented in a form that mimics obituary notices in a newspaper. The subject of a death (for example, "memory"), followed by the date of its death, leads into the main body of the prose poem laid out on the page in a column of text. They are punctuated, making the poems themselves a bit easier to read, but the wordplay and imagery is intact.

Every so often there is a set of paired tanka. I'm not quite sure how they function with the rest of the poems quite yet, but will soon figure it out. There is also one section of "fractured" sonnets, similar to the final "Dear P." section in Barbie Chang.

Most of the poems are about the stroke her father suffered or the illness and death of her mother. In the midst of her sorrow and grief, she writes beautiful lines about the loss. She infuses them with a bit of absurdity and a healthy helping of dark humor and a willingness to examine the reality of the suffering we all engage in life.

I need a couple of more readings of these poems to get a good grasp on them. I am absolutely ready to do just that!